[CZ][S4E26] Budeš mít roli svou (You'll Play Your Part)

[wolfrin]

I'm still working on it. Almost done, only fix some heights.
Tasting video:

[Renard]

Sweet, more languages! Thanks :)

[Renard]

Uploaded to Owncloud

[Renard]

Had a quick glance at it. It's a nice start, but you need to break words into syllables - won't work fine in the game if you don't.

For instance :
: 211 12 5  všechno
is two syllables, which don't have the same pitch. :)

Also, words that are only one syllable, but with a pitch variation, still need to be broken down (the pitch always prevail).

Finally you probably will want to make this a "Freestyle" note, hard for a microphone to catch:
: 1659 6 2  k
(and it doesn't really have a pitch in the song either)

[wolfrin]

You gonna tell me that I still have to work on the song? OK, no problem.
You suggest me dispense syllables and some separate vowels and consonants give to "F" note?
And any break isn't possible, because there isn't any break.

[Smilley]

You can split words into multiple notes, and you'll need to. To take the first line in the song, it should be split:

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Ne-ní to, že nej-sem vděč-ná
Za všech-no, co da-li jste mi
You can check the English versions for reference, too.
And have somewhat shorter lines, even if it means breaking up sentences, like I did above. Now I don't know if this break makes the resulting lines look awkward, as I don't speak a word of Czech (Czechish?), so I leave it to your judgement, but the lines as you have them are simply too long.
Also, your pitching is pretty far off. Again, refer to the English version and the song creation FAQ if you need pointers.

[wolfrin]

Ok, final version.
Syllables, heights, length, breaks all remastered. That was so lengthy that it has three minutes.

[Smilley]

1600 BPM is way too much. You should aim for something like 300-400. And you still didn't split up all the syllables. Check reply #5. For every "-", there should be a new note. You did it for a few words further back in the song, so why not all throughout?
I wonder, what program did you use to create this file?

[wolfrin]

I was use Ultrastar creator and BMP was my bad.
really final version in some words isn't possible to split it for gramatic reason.
pack

[Smilley]

Grammar has nothing to do with it. It's seperate syllables. They are at different pitches. Every note should contain exactly one audiable vowel. And the pitching is still awfully off. Load the file into USDX/MLK, go to the editor - see the song creation guide linked in my sig - and press SHIFT+P. Do the same with the English version for a comparison.
The easiest thing for you to do is get the English version, rewrite the lyrics and move the gap and some notes around until it matches up again.

[wolfrin]

Last edit. Good As It Gets from me.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/tmsgqjqzrh9mr6g/notes.txt?dl=0 , You exactly can't compare English and Czech. Never can exactly get along.
I did what I could, again. Pitching is hard approximately do when disagree lengths.

[Smilley]

It's much better. At least I have a solid framework and don't have to do it all from scratch. I already started making improvements, and will post them here when I'm done.
One thing, though, if you plan to do another song sometime: when breaking up the lyrics into words, put the space on the latter word.
So it's "Three" " months" " of" " win" "ter"... instead of "Three " "months " "of  " "win" "ter "...
I hope that's clear. It makes later editing much easier.

[Smilley]

Got it finished now. Could you take another look, just to make sure I didn't horribly mangle the language by accident:

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#ENCODING:UTF8
#TITLE:Budeš mít roli svou
#ARTIST:My Little Pony
#CREATOR:wolfrin
#EDITION:My Little Pony
#GENRE:Pony
#LANGUAGE:Czech
#MP3:song.mp3
#COVER:cover.jpg
#BACKGROUND:background.jpg
#VIDEO:video.mp4
#BPM:400
#GAP:8887
: 6 5 4 Ne
: 11 6 4 ní
: 18 4 4 to,
: 23 4 4 že
: 30 11 4 nej
: 44 8 2 sem
: 58 8 4 vděč
: 70 14 2 ná
- 87
: 87 5 2 za
: 95 7 2 všech
: 104 4 0 no,
: 111 10 0 co
: 126 4 0 da
: 131 4 0 li
: 137 7 0  jste
: 145 24 -5  mi
- 185
: 205 5 4 Za
: 212 6 4 všech
: 220 4 4 no
: 228 6 4 to,
: 240 7 7 co
: 249 9 4 poz
: 260 8 2 na
: 272 7 4 la
: 284 11 2 jsem
- 298
: 298 4 2 a
: 305 3 2 po
: 309 3 2 u
: 314 5 0 če
: 321 14 0 ní
: 339 5 0 ži
: 346 6 4 vo
: 353 27 2 tní
- 397
: 404 3 2 A
: 408 3 2 le
: 413 5 2  ne
: 418 4 0 tu
: 424 8 0 ším,
: 435 6 -3 kam
: 443 9 0 mí
: 453 15 4 řím
: 469 7 2 dá
: 478 19 0 -ál
- 503
: 510 4 0 Ja
: 515 6 4 ko
: 522 5 4 u
: 530 8 5  ro
: 539 8 7 li
: 552 7 4 za
: 565 6 2 stat
: 574 34 0 mám
- 620
: 632 3 0 Ne
: 635 9 0 vím
: 649 6 0  kam
: 662 7 4  se
: 670 11 4  mám
: 684 5 2 vy
: 690 12 0 dat
- 718
: 723 6 -5 když
: 730 4 -5 je
: 737 5 -3 ces
: 745 4 0 ta
: 751 6 0 mi
: 762 8 0 nez
: 771 13 -1 ná
: 787 57 0 má
- 900
: 1006 7 4 Svá
: 1016 4 4 kří
: 1021 5 4 dla
: 1027 13 4 mám,
: 1042 4 2 ko
: 1047 4 2 run
: 1055 3 0 ku
: 1061 19 4 též
- 1088
: 1092 8 2 Prin
: 1101 5 2 ce
: 1107 5 2 zna
: 1114 15 0 jsem
: 1138 9 -5 prav
: 1150 5 -5 da
: 1156 21 -5 je
- 1190
: 1225 3 4 Po
: 1229 12 4 řád
: 1244 4 4 ne
: 1249 12 7 mám
: 1264 7 4 po
: 1272 9 2 ně
: 1284 17 4 tí
- 1305
: 1305 5 2 to
: 1312 4 2 co
: 1317 7 2 je
: 1326 6 0 mi
: 1338 8 0 so
: 1348 5 0 u
: 1354 9 4 ze
: 1364 37 2 né
- 1415
: 1431 5 0 Chtě
: 1437 5 0 la
: 1443 5 0 bych
: 1450 16 4 mít
: 1469 7 4 svo
: 1477 5 4 u
: 1483 5 2 ro
: 1489 19 0 li
- 1512
: 1517 4 2 dě
: 1521 8 4 lat
: 1535 9 5 co
: 1545 8 7 je
F 1554 4 0 v
: 1560 7 4 si
: 1568 6 2 lá
: 1575 7 0 -ách
: 1584 31 0 mých
- 1623
: 1631 5 0 Chtě
: 1637 8 0 la
: 1649 8 0 bych
F 1659 5 0 k
: 1667 10 4 dí
: 1679 6 4 lu
: 1688 7 2 přis
: 1698 14 0 pět
- 1720
: 1725 5 -5 tou
: 1732 9 -5 zím
: 1742 9 -3 vám
: 1753 14 0 být
: 1773 5 2 so
: 1779 4 2 u
: 1784 12 0 čá
: 1798 55 0 stí
- 1875
: 1908 7 -1 Tvůj
: 1916 3 -1 o
: 1920 5 2 sud
: 1928 8 0 je
: 1938 9 -1 ne
: 1948 6 0 ji
: 1956 24 -5 stý
- 1985
: 1989 5 -1 a
: 1995 5 -1 to
: 2001 6 0 je
: 2010 5 2 ně
: 2017 5 2 kdy
: 2024 7 0 na
: 2032 7 -1 ob
: 2040 37 -5 tíž
- 2081
: 2086 6 -1 Však
F 2093 1 0 s
: 2095 6 -1 kaž
: 2102 7 0 dým
: 2112 11 2 tvým
: 2125 7 0 roz
: 2133 9 -1 hod
: 2143 8 0 nu
: 2152 7 2 tí
: 2160 25 4 -ím
- 2189
: 2189 6 -1 vše
: 2199 5 2 lé
: 2205 5 0 pe
: 2211 10 0 pak
: 2223 6 -1 po
: 2231 9 2 cho
: 2246 39 0 píš
- 2290
: 2295 5 -1 Če
: 2301 5 0 kat
: 2308 8 2 jen
: 2319 11 0 bý
: 2331 11 -1 vá
: 2344 9 0 těž
: 2358 22 -5 ké
- 2384
: 2384 5 5 A
: 2391 8 5 chá
: 2400 4 5 pu,
: 2406 7 5 že
: 2417 6 4 ty
: 2429 9 0 chceš
: 2442 36 -5 víc
- 2485
: 2492 5 0 Ne
: 2498 5 2 ní
: 2504 6 2 snad
: 2511 6 2 né
: 2520 9 0 tr
: 2530 8 -1 pě
: 2540 10 0 li
: 2551 14 4 vý
: 2566 15 4 být
- 2585
: 2585 4 0 než
F 2590 3 0 k
: 2594 5 2 vý
: 2600 5 0 ši
: 2606 10 0 nám
: 2617 10 0 po
: 2628 8 2 le
: 2638 45 2 tíš
- 2689
: 2696 3 2 To,
: 2700 4 5 že
: 2706 3 5 tu
: 2715 8 5 jsi
: 2724 7 5 má
: 2734 5 7 však
: 2740 10 5 dů
: 2751 18 0 vod
- 2774
: 2778 4 2 Jsi
: 2788 7 3 sil
: 2796 9 3 ná
: 2806 3 3 a
: 2814 9 3 na
: 2825 9 5 da
: 2835 36 3 ná
- 2875
: 2879 5 0 Ko
: 2885 6 3 run
: 2892 4 3 ka
: 2898 7 3 co
: 2909 7 3 no
: 2920 13 5 síš
: 2935 6 5 zna
: 2943 8 3 čí,
: 2954 5 3  že
: 2960 8 3 pat
: 2969 15 0 říš
F 2985 3 0 k
: 2989 66 5 nám
- 3058
: 3058 4 5 Než
: 3064 5 7 se
: 3071 10 9 nám
: 3083 27 9 vdáš,
: 3112 5 9 přij
: 3119 4 7 de
: 3125 11 5 tvůj
: 3138 16 5 čas
- 3157
: 3157 4 5 Jak
: 3164 5 5 slun
: 3170 5 7 ce
F 3176 3 3 s
: 3181 6 7 mě
: 3192 11 5 sí
: 3205 5 5 cem
: 3213 4 5 u
: 3218 10 7 ví
: 3229 21 7 táš
- 3255
: 3255 5 5 Ja
: 3261 4 7 ko
: 3266 7 9 lás
: 3274 4 10 ka
F 3279 2 6 v
: 3281 9 12 srd
: 3291 10 12 ci
: 3304 4 14 mís
: 3309 5 12 to
: 3316 11 12 své
: 3328 22 9 zná
- 3353
: 3353 6 5 Prin
: 3360 5 5 ce
: 3366 9 7 znou
: 3378 8 7 teď
: 3392 15 5 jsi,
: 3414 10 2 svou
: 3426 26 7 ro
: 3453 8 5 li
: 3464 24 5 máš
- 3492
: 3492 4 5 Pro
: 3497 3 5 tebe
: 3502 9 5 dob
: 3515 6 0 ře,
: 3525 7 2 že
F 3534 4 0 ch
: 3539 8 5 ceš
: 3551 25 5 víc
- 3582
: 3585 3 5 Šan
: 3589 4 5 ci
: 3594 4 5 za
: 3599 13 5 zá
: 3614 6 0 řit,
: 3624 10 5 vy
: 3636 11 7 jít
: 3648 15 7 vstří
: 3664 19 5 -íc
- 3686
: 3686 8 9 Přij
: 3695 6 12 de
: 3702 5 12 de
: 3708 5 9 -n,
: 3714 9 9 kdy
: 3725 9 10 vše
: 3738 13 9 se
* 3752 5 7 o
* 3758 6 5 -o
* 3765 9 5 to
* 3775 50 5 čí
* 3826 20 7 -í
- 3849
: 3849 5 7 Než
: 3855 4 9 se
: 3861 11 11 nám
: 3873 26 11 vdáš,
: 3902 7 11 přij
: 3910 5 9 de
: 3916 11 7 tvůj
: 3928 14 7 čas
- 3946
: 3946 5 7 Jak
: 3952 6 7 slun
: 3959 6 9 ce
F 3966 3 0 s
: 3972 8 9 mě
: 3981 13 7 sí
: 3995 6 7 cem
: 4002 5 7 u
: 4008 5 7 ví
: 4014 5 9 -í
: 4020 23 9 táš
- 4046
: 4046 5 7 Ja
: 4052 5 7 ko
: 4058 6 9 lás
: 4065 4 11 ka
F 4069 2 0 v
: 4072 7 14 srd
: 4082 7 14 ci
: 4094 7 16 mís
: 4102 2 14 to
: 4106 11 14 své
: 4118 16 11 zná
- 4140
: 4144 5 7 Prin
: 4150 5 7 ce
: 4156 5 9 zno
: 4162 5 9 u
: 4169 6 9 teď
: 4181 14 7 jsi,
: 4205 12 4 svou
: 4218 24 9 ro
: 4244 9 7 li
: 4255 85 7 máš
- 4345
: 4345 6 4 Prin
: 4352 4 7 ce
: 4357 5 9 zno
: 4363 5 9 u
: 4371 7 9 teď
: 4380 17 7 jsi,
: 4404 12 4 svou
: 4419 25 9 ro
: 4445 18 7 li
: 4468 87 7 máš
E

I also have the feeling there is a word or syllable missing at the beginning of the line @2189.

[wolfrin]

Smilley, thousand times thanks and I'm apologize for recent absence, because I didn't have much time.
At @2189 nothing missing.
I'm going to test your reworking tomorrow. (today in GMT+1)