Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships

Started by Travoos, December 30, 2013, 05:52:04 AM

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Travoos



Can't get this song out of my head. Tried making my own song for it, then realized I'm too impatient.

Cover image / screenshot I took off the youtube video:

Lyrics are in the video's description.

Renard

#1
I tried a bit and oh gosh, I just can't get the pitch right. Feel free to pick it up and continue the work. :P

Timings, on the other hand, are done.

Flutter_Bat

This version may be easier to work with  8)

blackwolverine2

Tested it, one of the lyrics is incorrect. "Uncurl" should be "Unfurl"

Renard

Which occurrence ? "Uncurl" appears three times in the song, and I hear the "c" each time (also on Slyphstorm's cover).

blackwolverine2

It's in the description of this video which was posted by the creator of Rainbow Dash Presents.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBgKP5erzWQ

Diponi

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Quote from: blackwolverine2 on May 22, 2014, 02:49:28 AM
It's in the description of this video which was posted by the creator of Rainbow Dash Presents.
You'd be surprised how often there are mistakes in the lyrics given by artists. Anything from missing words to additional lines, really.

Anyways, I'd lean towards "unfurl". It's hard to hear, because the singer's accent has a nearly silent "f" throughout the song. (And frankly, I can't stand that voice.)
By the way, "plans unfurl" is a much more common expression than "plans uncurl".

SlyphStorm's cover definitely uses "unfurl", though. (And frankly, it has a much nicer voice.)

Renard

Changed all "uncurl" occurences to "unfurl".