-UPDATE v1.21- PMV Devo - Whip it

[Mirthos]

So i decided to take this little PMV video I found and turn it into a song. Of course its a Pony PMV otherwise I wouldn't be posting this. Feedback would be nice.

I used a already pre-made whip it song to create this. Some of the song was off with the PMV video so I tried my best to fix this problem. Some of the freestyle lyrics are off but the normal lyrics seem to be fine. I have played the song a few times and fixed some things.

For those of you that like this song I hope you enjoy this video as much as I do. I will keep experimenting with the timings to hopefully get the all correct. Once I do I will re-post the lyrics.

I hope you guys like it! This is for me to practice timing skills, so I will be messing around with it to make it better. Download below.

The original video and cover are there, but the video is now off because of my changes.

-UPDATE-
So I have fixed it to the best of my abilities. I have taken out the original cover art, video and song. If someone can fix the timing issues that would be great. My focus is on a new song that I will be posting when its ready for you guys to critique it. So expect that later down the road. That song may also be my last, I may ask if other people to do the song pitches while I do the tapping because I'm no good with pitches. So I hope you guys like it! New download below.

Download- http://www.mediafire.com/download/p8w1mn79k6ho7m6/Devo_-_Whip_it_v1.21.zip

-Video and song-

Here are the lyrics-have changed

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#TITLE:Whip it (Pony PMV)
#ARTIST:Devo
#EDITION:My Little Pony
#GENRE:Rock
#LANGUAGE:English
#YEAR:1980
#MP3:PMV- Whip it.mp3
#COVER:cover.png
#VIDEO:video.mp4
#END:162000
#BPM:398.65
#GAP:19550
#PREVIEWSTART:46,602
#MEDLEYSTARTBEAT:626
#MEDLEYENDBEAT:1012
F 0 2 25 Crack
F 4 7 25 ~
F 15 7 25  that
F 24 7 25  whip
- 41
: 81 7 14 give
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: 106 6 16  slip
- 138
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: 186 5 16 ~
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* 358 2 11 When
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F 1404 2 25  it
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F 1555 1 25  say
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F 1565 3 25  it
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F 1635 2 25  it
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F 2181 2 25 Crack
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F 2195 7 25  that
F 2206 8 25  whip
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: 2262 8 14 give
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: 2277 3 16  past
: 2284 1 14  the
* 2288 6 16  slip
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: 2347 2 14 Step
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: 2362 5 14  crack
: 2368 4 16 ~
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: 2423 6 14 Break
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: 2444 1 14 ma's
: 2449 6 16  back
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: 2608 3 10 Be
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: 2666 8 18 you
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* 2701 2 10 When
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: 2716 4 11  go
: 2722 2 10 in'
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* 2736 8 14 you
: 2745 2 14  must
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- 2912
F 2927 4 25 get
F 2938 6 25  straight
- 2963
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F 2992 3 25 ward
- 3005
F 3018 3 25 move
F 3023 4 25  a
F 3028 6 25 head
- 3038
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F 3052 3 25  to
F 3057 2 25  de
F 3062 3 25 tect
F 3069 3 25  it
- 3078
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F 3451 2 25  whip
F 3456 4 25  it
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F 3499 3 25 whip
F 3504 1 25  it
F 3509 9 25  good
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[Renard]

Sorry for the late answer, and thanks for your contribution :)