4everfreebrony - Life Outside (A Fandom Anthem)

[TeenBronyTH]

Alternative Title: Life Outside (feat. BlackGryph0n, Aviators, dBPony, Luna Jax, MEMJ0123, P1K, Manta Tsubasa & PrinceWhateverer)

Bandcamp track: https://4everfreebrony.bandcamp.com/track/life-outside-feat-blackgryph0n-aviators-dbpony-luna-jax-memj0123-p1k-manta-tsubasa-princewhateverer

Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PWqJ_LxSDoY

Cover image: the one from the Bandcamp album
                    or https://www.deviantart.com/dragonwolfrooke/art/Life-Outside-pt2-628175726

Background image: https://www.deviantart.com/dragonwolfrooke/art/Life-Outside-pt1-628175464

Lyrics:

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(4EFB)
There's a world that should be real somewhere
There's a lack of tension and love to spare
I would tell you that I'd been before
It was just behind the dreamer's door
Just behind the dreamer's door

(Luna Jax)
Painted hills and colored skies
A wondrous view that simply strikes the heart

(Aviators)
There's one who holds the stars in place
Another who keeps it all from falling apart

(P1K)
The same routine runs every day
But that's just who they are

(chorus) (Black Gryph0n)
Life outside of the wall
I would say I'd dreamed it
Real one time, if at all
I could hardly tell you
Who's to know, what you'll find
But it's there, I'm sure
What you're looking for is just behind the dreamer's door

(MEMJ0123)
There's one who works until sundown
Another who sees the beauty in everyone

(dBPony)
This one takes the sky to heart
The other one knows the best ways to have fun

(Manta Tsubasa)
The quiet one's still searching
But she knows who she'll become

(repeat chorus)

(PrinceWhateverer)
Open up, take a look
You will never believe it
Take a step, feel the air
Cherish what you see

(4EFB)
There's a girl who wants to do her best
'Til she has it, she won't stop or rest
Doesn't know just what there is in store
What there is behind the dreamer's door
What there is behind the dreamer's door

[tom300z]

Audio, cover and lyrics: https://4everfreebrony.bandcamp.com/track/life-outside-feat-blackgryph0n-aviators-dbpony-luna-jax-memj0123-p1k-manta-tsubasa-princewhateverer

Download: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1oR89EOoHG6-a_3cI5gYFXj1h6Uifly-a?usp=sharing

I can't believe this one hasn't been mapped before so i gave it a try myself.

This is the first time i tried mapping a song so i'd love to hear your feedback, so please let me know if i can improve anything or if you have any tips.

[tom300z]

Here you go: https://www.mylittlekaraoke.com/forum/index.php?topic=2222
It's not 100% polished yet though

[barbeque]

Played this (on Hard) yesterday, this is rather excellent stuff! I think the two 'biggest' issues are that the title is really long (as in, it overflows the space reserved for it), and I think that when a word like for~ is split across two notes, it's preferred to do it like fo-or. Not entirely sure on what's the exact preferred form though, plus it's trivial to change anyway, so don't worry about it.

With that said, I'll just reiterate that this is rather excellent. Also, this song has an instrumental! It's part of More Instrumentals (Part One), https://4everfreebrony.bandcamp.com/track/life-outside-instrumental

[tom300z]

Thanks for testing my mapping!

I've removed all of the tildes either by further splitting words or adding more vowels. I think that looks much better in-game. I left the title unchanged as i didn't want to remove any credits and placing them in the artist tag caused the same visual problem.
I also added the instrumental version you linked.

I think i'll repost this in the finished section now so this hopefully makes it into the game one day.

[barbeque]

I always thought the finished section was meant for stuff that actually has been released through the MLK download thingy, and Renard just moves this thread to there (if he doesn't forget it, that is :P) ? But eh, as long as this thread is here, it'll serve as a reminder anyway.

Whenever I host karaoke I always have a ton of extra stuff anyway, so I'll just put this in there as well for the time being.

[tom300z]

I guess i misunderstood the finished section then. I'll remove my topics there and leave them here for the time being. Thanks for letting me know.