Silver Note - Eastward

[Pluie]

Hi!

This is my first song, so hopefully I got everything right.

I think it's pretty good, but I do have a few concerns:
1. I tried to avoid fricative consonants by cutting notes short (I think it was suggested somewhere). This makes it easier to sing, but when playing it in the editor, the clicks seem to not line up. Hopefully this is okay.
2. I'm not always sure when to end long notes, as they can trail off for a while.
3. I'm not sure if the last three notes in  "Toge~ther we'll" should all be the same note. It sounds like that to me, but maybe the "~" should be moved up a semitone?

Anyways, it's in the WIP folder on the cloud (I don't have permission to move it to QA). It's completely finished, so feedback would be appreciated!

[Renard]

Great submission! I'll give you more feedback later on, I'm overworked :p