Kindness - AccousticMandoBrony

[Renard]

There's a chance that I could fall
And not come back
And never regret a thing
I'd never get back on track

Darkness all around me,
I can't find the light,
I let it all surround me,
Giving up without a fight.

The bitterness and pain inside,
Countless tears I had to cry,
I was facing all my fears,
Just to let you in
To dry my tears, but


Your kindness won't betray me,
I feel your heart and soul,
Your kindness still can save me,
I choose to not let go,
Stretching out you somehow reach me,
I know this can't be wrong,
I'm ready, won't you teach me
Your song of kindness


Quiet grace surrounds you,
And helps me find my own,
I can't tell you how you've helped me,
And how much I have grown,

Even though you're far away,
Inspiration comes from you,
To shine a littler brighter every day,
If you only knew...

I will never get upset,
And I will never, ever forget,
The happiness you made me feel,
Almost as if you're actually real, but


Your kindness won't betray me,
I feel your heart and soul,
Your kindness still can save me,
I choose to not let go,
Stretching out you somehow reach me,
I know this can't be wrong,
I'm ready, won't you teach me
Your song of kindness


Your kindness won't betray me,
I feel your heart and soul,
Your kindness still can save me,
In a way you'll never know.

Your kindness won't betray me,
I feel your heart and soul,
Your kindness still can save me,
I choose to not let go,
Stretching out you somehow reach me,
I know this can't be wrong,
I'm ready, won't you teach me
The way to get along,
Even when the cold wind's blowing,
And I want to just give in,
It warms my heart just knowing,
I'll hear your voice again,
So won't you sing it loud,
And won't you sing it long,
I promise to remember,
Your song of kindness

I promise to remember.
I promise to remember.

[RD1042]

Hello,

I tried (with the very helpful tutorial) to make this song for MLK.
[EDIT]: Fixed the problems mentioned by Renard and two pitching mistakes.

You can dl it here: http://www.mediafire.com/download/0ivx759mz73x5bi/AcoustiMandoBrony%20-%20Kindness.rar.

Video included:

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Tell me what you think.

[Renard]

Had a quick glance at it, ran it in USDX but couldn't try to sing it yet. It seems to be really good! The file structure is great, the pitches seem accurate on screen. Awesome job.

The only two nitpicks I'd have would be:
- Punctuation is usually not needed when a line breaks occur (ie, trailing comas at the end of lines) and can be removed.
- Notes should be shortened a bit so words don't "glue" to each others. This is very trivial to fix in the YASS editor, as it's only one click away.

Don't get me wrong about this, as it's definitely a great job :)

[RD1042]

Uploaded a polished version to the cloud.