dBPony - Make This Pony Mine

Started by Ziminite, May 01, 2015, 05:07:16 AM

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Note: This song's quite a bit stylistic with the way he sings it. For instance, in the Chorus, the line "All of the things that I will say to her can't fail tonight" is sung more along the lines of "All the things that I will say to her, can't fail, a-to-ni~i~ight". "Inside" can be "a-in-siiiide", and "out" can be ouu-h-uut.

In addition to adding a lot of extra syllables, he also mashes together words pretty heavily. In the previous example, I took out the word "of" in the second iteration of the line because it's so mashed together with "all", but you can barely tell it's there. In the first Verse, "I take a look outside" is more like "uhtake a look outside".

This is a really fun song to sing, but I feel it would take a lot of effort to sound out all the syllables and such used! There are already some songs in the MLK playlist that include extra syllables in the lyrics as you sing, so I felt this was notable to mention. In the lyrics I'll include as many notable instances in brackets as I can.



Quote[Verse 1]
I wake up
Get out of bed
I take a look outside

A new day
In Ponyville
Release a lustful sigh
Sigh~

I can't stop thinking of her
Her colors match her forms and all [of] her curves
My dear Rarity you're always on my mind
It's got me in a bind

[Pre-Chorus 1]
Her eyes shine like all [of?] the greatest gems outside
I need to stop thinking 'bout her before I lose my mind
Hah! Maybe I better swallow my pride!

[Chorus]
'Cause today and tonight
I'm gonna try to find a way to make this pony mine
All [of] the things that I will say to her can't fail [a-]tonight

Today, hah!, I'll go
My heart's beating through my chest because it can't let go
of the feelings that it holds for her so close [a-]inside

[Verse 2]
I rush out to go to her [a-]when she calls my name
I'll help her with all [of?] her chores, heh
I'll take on anything

[Pre-Chorus 2]
The way she flows that tail the wind that hits her mane
All of these things just drive me crazy and insane

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
Oooo's~
Cover me baby (Actually not sure if it's "Cover me" or "Call for me", or maybe something else for both these iterations. Help!)
Cover me baby[-ahaa~]

Heheh so... I just thought I'd let you know...

[Chorus]

[Outro]
Aaah's and ooh's~
Make this pony mine
All [of] the things that I [will?] say, [a-]cannot fail, [a-]tonight
Aaah's and ooh's~
Make this pony mine
All [of] the things that I [will?] say, [a-]cannot fail, unintelligible noise that sounds cool

(I would recommend ending it after the unintelligible noise, but as it's fading out)
Haa naah's~
Make this pony mine
Haa naah's~
Make this pony mine

Cover:
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Static:
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Final Note: This took way too long I was just gonna say screw it but too much time was spent on this ;0;