-Update v1.2- Love me Cheerilee by Woodentoaster and The living tombstone

[Mirthos]

I requested 20% cooler awhile ago, but that song was a little hard for me to start with. So i decided to start with something a lot easier, so I did this song. Tell me what you guys think. Only the beginning is completed, so about more than half of the song isn't to the music yet. It has a video with it as well. I have provided a download of the song below. There is no adfly so don't worry about adds (i hate that stuff anyway). It's in the form of a zip file because mediafire doesn't like normal folders so, you are going to need winrar or 7-zip. (7-zip is free!)

Tell me what you guys think. Was I off on any pitches (i probably am). Any pointers on how to make the song better would be great! :D Thanks in advance!

-Edit-
Well i have done the rest of the song. The download will be updated as soon as its on mediafire. So the updated code is where the old code was. So hope you guys like it. Please, please, please tell me what you guys think. I need to know so I may make it better! An instrumental version is included in the new download.

-Edit-
Download has been updated. Tell me what you think everypony. Hope you like it. I will also be testing it myself but im not the greatest at this kind of stuff.

Download- http://www.mediafire.com/download/31dzrhbq5qauzc8/Love_me_Cheerilee_v1.2.zip

For those of you that would rather look here you go!
-video-

-song lyrics-

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#TITLE:Love me Cheerilee
#ARTIST:Woodentoaster and the living Tombstone
#CREATOR:Woodentoaster and the living Tombstone
#EDITION:My Little Pony
#LANGUAGE:English
#YEAR:2012
#MP3:song.mp3
#COVER:cover.png
#BACKGROUND:background.png
#VIDEO:video.mp4
#BPM:209.92
#GAP:37010
: 0 2 5 Hey
: 3 4 4  Cheeri
: 7 2 2 lee
: 9 2 5  Hey
: 11 4 4  Cheeri
: 15 8 1 lee
- 20
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: 1874 4 0 lee
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: 1881 1 6  I'm
: 1882 2 7  in
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: 1889 4 7 ve
: 1894 3 3  with
: 1898 4 1  you
: 1902 9 -1 ~
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-cover-
http://userserve-ak.last.fm/serve/500/74493986/Glaze+And+The+Living+Tombstone+Screen+Shot+20120218+at+185528.png
-background-
http://i1.ytimg.com/vi/Ji4IQR9Zbwo/maxresdefault.jpg

[Marioland1]

This should go in the WIP section, not the suggestion section.  Also, the lyrics are generally posted in a code block so that they don't take so much of a page to show.

[Smilley]

This should go in the WIP section, not the suggestion section.  Also, the lyrics are generally posted in a code block so that they don't take so much of a page to show.

Done and done.

[Smilley]

Took a look at the notes. Here are some observations:
1) The tapping, as far as it's done, is OK. You just need a bit of work on the last note in any given line. You can create an additional syllable to test whether a sung word has ended yet; and delete it afterwards.
2) The pitching, unfortunately, is way off. This is also the hardest part. And this song isn't particularly easy to pitch, either.

Did you use the Ultrastar DX built-in editor? If so, did you check out my guide? It can provide some helpful pointers.

EDIT:
3) You put the files into the .zip twice.

[Mirthos]

Well for the tapping I used UltraStar song creator, but I used the in-game creator for everything else. And i haven't seen your guide, I think im going to take a look at it.

And about double files are you sure? Ones supposed to be the instrumental version.

[Marioland1]

The instrumental version goes in the same folder as the normal one, just with different filenames (such as notes.txt and instrumental.txt.  Both of those should contain configuration lines, and therefore look for the names of other specified files for their versions, like song.mp3 and instrumental.mp3).  Although it's possible to separate them and have them work, it's preferable to keep them together in the same folder.

[Renard]

Grabbed it - thanks :)

[Smilley]

Let's not mince words: this version was REALLY bad. I had wanted to go back and redo it for some time, but now it's finally done.

[sleumas2000]

Correction: It's not Done.
I started work on it, and forgot about it.
I'm working on it again now.
It will be done as of shortly

[Smilley]

Erm, I already did it. Check the Cloud folder. I didn't realize you worked on it as well until after I was done, so I reworked it from scratch.

[sleumas2000]

Oh no.
There is a chance I overwrote yours then.
Lemme check
I've been editing stuff in my Old Owncloud Folder since it migrated.
Derp
I haven't overwritten anything.
I expect that your version is better than mine, so I'll leave mine to gather dust.

I just migrated my changes in the old Yaycloud folder to the new one.
Hopefully, this shouldn't happen again!