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Title: Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships
Post by: Travoos on December 30, 2013, 05:52:04 AM


Can't get this song out of my head. Tried making my own song for it, then realized I'm too impatient.

Cover image / screenshot I took off the youtube video: (http://i.imgur.com/IlqMthZ.png)

Lyrics are in the video's description.
Title: Re: Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships
Post by: Renard on February 17, 2014, 06:04:10 PM
I tried a bit and oh gosh, I just can't get the pitch right. Feel free to pick it up and continue the work. :P

Timings, on the other hand, are done.
Title: Re: Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships
Post by: Flutter_Bat on May 11, 2014, 07:45:03 PM
This version may be easier to work with  8)
Title: Re: Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships
Post by: blackwolverine2 on May 20, 2014, 04:45:20 AM
Tested it, one of the lyrics is incorrect. "Uncurl" should be "Unfurl"
Title: Re: Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships
Post by: Renard on May 20, 2014, 06:41:27 AM
Which occurrence ? "Uncurl" appears three times in the song, and I hear the "c" each time (also on Slyphstorm's cover).
Title: Re: Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships
Post by: blackwolverine2 on May 22, 2014, 02:49:28 AM
It's in the description of this video which was posted by the creator of Rainbow Dash Presents.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBgKP5erzWQ
Title: Re: Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships
Post by: Diponi on May 22, 2014, 04:23:42 AM
Quote from: blackwolverine2 on May 22, 2014, 02:49:28 AM
It's in the description of this video which was posted by the creator of Rainbow Dash Presents.
You'd be surprised how often there are mistakes in the lyrics given by artists. Anything from missing words to additional lines, really.

Anyways, I'd lean towards "unfurl". It's hard to hear, because the singer's accent has a nearly silent "f" throughout the song. (And frankly, I can't stand that voice.)
By the way, "plans unfurl" is a much more common expression than "plans uncurl".

SlyphStorm's cover definitely uses "unfurl", though. (And frankly, it has a much nicer voice.)
Title: Re: Rainbow Dash Presents - Sinking Ships
Post by: Renard on May 22, 2014, 10:10:27 AM
Changed all "uncurl" occurences to "unfurl".